Bookends
At Dusk
Bands of lava
Pack the sky
Blur the horizon.
By Dawn
A single moon
Hung like an ornament
Keeps watch.
Posted in Friday Photo, tagged Alaska, full moon, Nature Photography, Personal Writing, Poetry, Sunset on October 29, 2010| 13 Comments »
Bookends
At Dusk
Bands of lava
Pack the sky
Blur the horizon.
By Dawn
A single moon
Hung like an ornament
Keeps watch.
Posted in Revision, Writing, tagged Critique Guidelines, Personal Writing, revision, Writing, writing process on October 25, 2010| 21 Comments »
I’ve been happily buried in a revision/rewrite for the past ten days on a WIP I hadn’t picked up for over a year.
I remembered writing the first draft of LAST CHANCE, that’s the working title, in about six weeks. Then over the course of a year I revised it half a dozen times and finally gave it to one person to read. I had two other books I was working on, so when the critique came back I read it and then set it aside. I continued working on the two other books, and wrote a first draft of another book.
When I finally picked up LAST CHANCE, I was a little overwhelmed. I remembered being really excited by the story and then deflated by the critique. The critique did a good job of pointing out LAST CHANCE’s weaknesses which was what I wanted, but it also fired a couple of personal jabs my way which kind of threw me off balance.
Now I’m a guy who taught in a school for behaviorally challenged students for 15 years. I’ve been cussed out, lied to, and threatened too many times to count. I’ve even been punched and kicked a few times, but none of it was personal. By that, I mean those kids were going through tough times and for whatever reasons that’s how their anger, fear and frustration manifested.
My point: when someone is supposed to critique your writing, when that’s the understanding, and they start critiquing you instead, it’s not about you, it’s about them. Don’t take it personally.
Is this hard to remember? Sometimes.
Do the memories of those personal comments still get under my skin? A little.
Am I putting to use some of the comments directed toward the book? Yes.
Will I ever seek out this person for another critique? I haven’t decided.
Have I spoken to this person about where I thought the critique went astray? I haven’t and don’t plan to.
Since I started blogging—the above critique pre-dates my blogging-days—I’ve had the pleasure of trading manuscripts with some really great people who’ve totally focused on the writing.
Have you ever received a critique that crossed the fine line between the writing and the writer? How did you handle it? How would you handle it in the future? If you’ve never experienced this, what do you think is the best way to handle this type of situation? I’d love to hear your thoughts.
(This weekend I was interviewed at Frolicking Through Cyberspace. Here’s the link if your interested: Frolicking Through Cyberspace)
Posted in Bio, Writing, tagged Bedtime Monster, Heather Ayris Burnell, Interview, Writing on October 23, 2010| 2 Comments »
Heather Ayris Burnell, author of the recently released picture book Bedtime Monster, (Raven Tree Press), was kind enough to interview me on her blog, Frolicking Through Cyberspace. If you’d like to read the interview, here’s the link: Interview.
Thanks, Heather.
And, I couldn’t resist showing off the cover of Bedtime Monster and a short summary:
A little boy doesn’t want to go to bed. He whines. He cries. He throws a tantrum. He begins to grow long claws and a tail. What? A tail? It’s true! This little boy is not only acting like a monster, he turns into one! He growls a scary growl. He grows a tail. But, his parents know what to do. They calmly cuddle, rock, and sing to him. Here is a monster you might actually want to snuggle with as bedtime draws near.
Thanks for stopping by.